高考考试英语书面表达类练C含答案
第一节：短文改错
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者不计分。
As the saying goes, chance favored the prepared mind.I learned this from one of my experience.
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school.Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball.Luckily, my best friend sTOPped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure.After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day.When another chance of trying out arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best.As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.21教育网
From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.
答案：第一句：favored→favors
第二句：experience→experiences
第三句：as后加a
第四句：play→playing
第五句：but→and; which→that
第六句：去掉on
第七句：full→fully
第九句：convincing→convinced; 第二个I→we
第二节：书面表达
假定你是李华，你的外教Ms Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国结，但你因故不可以赴约，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去。请你写一封邮件给Ms Jenkins，说明有关状况。
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注意：
1.词数100左右；
2．可以适合增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Jenkins，
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Yours，
Li Hua
参考范本：
Dear Ms Jenkins，
I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.
The reason is that I have got a cold, and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so.But don't worry.I've asked a friend of mine, Han Meimei, to go to your apartment instead.She is good at making Chinese knots.She will go there at 9：00 this Saturday morning.2·1·c·n·j·y
Please allow me to say sorry again.I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots.Wish you a good time!21cnjy.com
Yours，
Li Hua
